My SHARE-I

“I am starting to love myself so have to hate you,

I want calm in my life so have to finish your unending,

I am leaving you to find myself,

Now my journey of ME starts

So you have to stop:

…………………………………………………………………

I have to clear my mind to think of you,

I have to think of your sins to punish you,

I have to go through the pain you gave

And visit the hell you once sent me.

…………………………………………………………………

I have to make you spend sleepless nights,

I have to send you a cup of coffee to not let you sleep,

I have to be awake to see the struggling you,

I have to make a note of my cold days & nights,

I have to see me in you.

………………………………………………………………..

My LOVE, let’s be one at this last moment

Let’s walk on these broken glasses together,

Let’s be equal and give me a chance to break you,

I will give penetrating pain & you endure it,

I will curse and crush you & you endure it,

So let’s be equal before we part.”

……………………..She aspires to say to Him proudly. #nisMYworthNoor

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It’s not about me, its about US, this has always been my thought. I am no other than you. I am person of own mind, thoughts, values, commitments, choice and VOICE. So proud that all these adjectives are for me but unfortunately I hear every single person telling me that I am SUPPOSED to be some one else, this CANNOT be me; not even a single person has ever said that its right to be YOU but rather being different from crowd, not following the standard norms of the society is being rebellious. I write to express my agony, sadness & most importantly to express what I, WE, face every moment when we smile out but not in, see but not speak, speak with heart not mind when same is not done for us. I write to tell that there is more into US that you cannot achieve and worth to know. I am YOU……….Feel, understand, go through, face, confront, fight, cry, furious, love, care, lose….I am YOU………..you knw ME……..i knw YOU………………..WE knw each other……..WE are ONE

4 thoughts on “My SHARE-I

  1. I am sorry, I know I have no right to judge an art, but, a poetry is not something we usually write to give our thoughts, but we even have to make it smooth for people to understand and stick to it. I personally believe that each and every poem has a rhyming scheme which decides the structure of poem and indulge the reader in reading more. so I wanted to ask that what is the rhyming scheme in this poem and it is which type of poem?

    1. Glad u knw that an art should not be judged rather perceived. Every art has its own notion, story, atmosphere following which an author writes and it then depends on the receiver, who have the power to make it wholesome or an thorn of his life. Nothing has a fixed rule to follow just following the idea and heart is enough for art to beautify itself. Thoughts are given even if its wanted or unwanted sometimes in the form of my work and sometimes in the form of comments, but if we do not like something so just move on doors are opened to move to mediocrity, no one will stop anyone. Poem is about notion & thoughts and rhyme is for song unfortunately I have no mode of writing it now. I respect your belief but delightfully like you i have my own belief and understanding. My belief is that there will be someone who will look into reality and not rhetoric. Thank you for taking time in writing your thoughts and belief.

    2. I think you need to read some really famous poetries which don’t have a rhyming scheme….. there are 4 liners of Shakespeare with no rhyming nothing but contain deep meaning…… research more !! Thank you for giving your time.

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